Sir Edmund Hillary writing

 My name is Finley my class is learning about Sir Edmund Hilary we are supposed to think that we're Sir Edmund Hillary climbing up the mountaintop

 They gazed upon the mountaintop it was so high up the mountain that was covered in deep snow. Sir Edmund and his friend were wearing big puffy jackets to keep them warm as they walked up a little bit they get hungry and a bit tired.  Sir Edmund didn't want to give up so he keeps going. Do you know he  was climbing up Mount Everest. Wow!

They were a bit tired so they bring in a tent and put it down and have a little nap. As they wake up there were so many icicles on the little windows they packed up the stuff and kept going up. Everyone wanted to go back but they dug deep.  Edmund was half up the mountain and he didn't want to give up. 'I will keep going and going until I reach the top' "Yay!!!!!!!!!  I did it !!!!!!!!"