The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top
1 I gaze up the snowy Mountain the cold shivering cold swept across my face I felt like I was an ice block.
2 I keep walking ever step a take with my poles I feel exhausted my feet are just too tired I go any more am too exhausted
3 The shining sun from a cloud made me feel a little bit better than I have a little break.
4 I look ahead of me I keep going up with my poles I am nearly halfway there at the top I turn around and look at the beautiful view and the beautiful sunshine.
5 I keep walking up I think about all these people that have died on this Mountain I am a quarter of the way up there I start to have another break and sat down for a minute.
6 I finally reach the top I feel really warm with my big fluffy jacket .
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