Thursday 27 August 2020

Writing 7

 

The ground shook and birds flew away. Up came a ginormous face, it was a stone giant!  It looked as if he was stuck under the grass HELP! groaned the enormous stone giant. He was getting angrier by the minute. His face went red he was getting furious. Then he screamed AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! and the whole world trembled.

By Finley Blog you later Finley! BYE!



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2 comments:

  1. Mrs Haines27 August 2020 at 11:21

    Hi Finley
    I really like the last sentence, a strong ending.

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  2. Rachael Oshea28 August 2020 at 09:43

    Thanks for sharing your writing Finley. You are doing a great job at describing what is happening and how the giant is feeling. The next goal is to work on 'show not tell'. Keep up the great work.

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