Wednesday, 19 August 2020

WRITING! 2

 I put my harness on and I carefully walk up the Tower.I try not to look down if I do I feel sick in the tummy and my legs start to shake.  It looks like I am a 1000 metres high up. The cold in the air  sweeps across my face I walk up slowly taking one step at a time. I feel like I am walking up into the clouds.

Blog you later bloggers BYE!
                                                                        

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Finley. Great work on your story! I love how you used senses to say what you saw and how you felt. You have described it well where I can picture it happening in my head. Kapai!

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  2. "Walking in the clouds"...what a great description, Finley. This piece of writing gave me vertigo....

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