Sick Sentences

These are the sick sentences:

The ball came towards Richie. He jumped into the air. He held out his hands. He was excited. It was up to him. 

Here are my better sentences:

Richie Macaw turn around he could see the rugby ball heading towards.

 He jumped up High to grab the bal. He caught it and ran fast as could. He  scored. The crowd went wild.

His teammates came to him giving him a pat on the back.

He was extremely excited.